Just wondering what you thought. Sorry it was taken with a fisheye lens. Its the only picture I have of my tattoo on my computer. 

Maybe it’s just the fisheye, but I think it’s a little hard to read. Took me a few second to see “invincible” (at first I thought it said invisible) but I think that’s really just because the shading needed to get brought up higher, especially in the dots of the i’s. It also strikes me as a little heavier on the right than the left, which the artist tried to even out by raising part of the v, but just makes the v look like an I or something.
But the overall style is nice. I like the flow of the letters (really nice curves) plus those little half-way breaking points. The tribal-ish thing underneath is a really nice touch too, and flows well.

Just wondering what you thought. Sorry it was taken with a fisheye lens. Its the only picture I have of my tattoo on my computer. 

Maybe it’s just the fisheye, but I think it’s a little hard to read. Took me a few second to see “invincible” (at first I thought it said invisible) but I think that’s really just because the shading needed to get brought up higher, especially in the dots of the i’s. It also strikes me as a little heavier on the right than the left, which the artist tried to even out by raising part of the v, but just makes the v look like an I or something.

But the overall style is nice. I like the flow of the letters (really nice curves) plus those little half-way breaking points. The tribal-ish thing underneath is a really nice touch too, and flows well.

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